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Some_unknown_dude, 06 Oct 2006 05:15 pm

Ooooh! Ancient civilizations!! Ok the story's very neat and interesting(reminds me a bit of Naruto, but oh well :)... as for the graphic side, you need to improve, of course... but it's not impossible-- you're definitely on the right path for comics/manga/graph novels/whatever. A few friendly advices i'd give you would be to study and copy human anatomy... like, you know, those naked dudes and gals in drawing books? copy their bodies until you get the whole concept... that's all i have to say-- and also, don't give up if this' what you enjoy!

kuchinawa, 19 Oct 2006 05:26 pm

Thanks. But I have improved however, if you'd look at chapters 2 and 3. At least the quality came out better, but you're definitely right about my anatomy issues, I need to work on that. :P

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